Friday, October 22, 2010

Whirlwind

Try this again, internet ate the last post...
Possible entry for the calendar, posting it up for crits before I send it in :)



6 comments:

  1. Niiice! Glad to see some calendar entry work :D

    Since you asked for crits:

    My only major one is that her neck looks too thick/too squished. It's kind of a tricky angle and one that you might have to fudge a little to make it 'look' right, even if it's technically accurate. I would raise her head just a tiny bit and give her neck a bit more shape.

    I love her expression! :]

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  2. What Daest said. I'll add that I love the color palette and the skin texture you've captured. Nice!

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  3. Hot stuff!! I love it!

    I second Daestwen's crit, and I also think the background appears a little flat maybe? I know it's not a huge deal probably (who looks at that anyway?!). I think it's because the swords divide the foreground and the background quite literally, it might pay to have some branches vertically overlap the swords to connect top to bottom.

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  4. Colour scheme is great, and it's fab to see a smile! The reason the BG looks a bit flat is the shadows under the leaves. They aren't long enough to travel the length of the light beams, and as a result look like they are resting on a flat surface. I second the comment on the neck! Easily sorted with PS. :)

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  5. Thanks for the great crits guys! Keep em comin if you got em :)

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